Comments on: Write It! Wednesday #1: What’s Your Logline? https://diymfa.demo.cmsminds.net/writing/write-it-logline/ Tools & Techniques for the Serious Writer Sat, 24 Nov 2012 13:43:00 +0000 hourly 1 By: Satia https://diymfa.demo.cmsminds.net/writing/write-it-logline/#comment-619 Sat, 24 Nov 2012 13:43:00 +0000 https://diymfa.com/?p=3905#comment-619 Trying again. Here is my link:

https://satia.blogspot.com/2012/11/loglines-or-just-taste-of-whats-to-come.html

]]> By: DIYMFA https://diymfa.demo.cmsminds.net/writing/write-it-logline/#comment-614 Thu, 15 Nov 2012 04:05:00 +0000 https://diymfa.com/?p=3905#comment-614 In reply to Chihuahua Zero.

Ooh, sounds intriguing! Question: what’s at stake? What will happen if the pilot doesn’t find and defeat the enemy.

Also, love the idea of a mute protagonist. Very unique and also a challenge in terms of letting the reader into the character’s head.

]]> By: Chihuahua Zero https://diymfa.demo.cmsminds.net/writing/write-it-logline/#comment-613 Wed, 14 Nov 2012 21:18:00 +0000 https://diymfa.com/?p=3905#comment-613 A young, mute mecha pilot pursues a friend-turned-traitor, whose alliance with the extra-dimensional enemy threaten their city.

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